Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, April 21, 2020
guess what this is
Our teacher miss smith gave us a task which was to complete this writing task.in this writing we had to write about being wandered through the woods.This writing tasks is one of my favourite ones I tolded my family & they all guessed what it is.Can you try guess what it is?
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Great work Aarooshi. Make sure this is put into your writing folder in your drive.
ReplyDeleteHi Aarooshi, this is Ella. I like how much you described everything. Maybe next time instead of having to bunch stuff together put it on a doc. Is it an alien?
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