Wednesday, April 15, 2020
THE PONY WHO NEVER WENT TO THE MOVIES AGAIN
During the lock down our teacher gave as a writing task which was we had to write a story using
3 of these following things which were lamp , banana , movie theatre , baseball cap & a pony.
I really liked doing it because I was using lots of my imagination which I like using .Do you like using your imagination ? tell me at the comment section.
2 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
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Hi Arooshi
ReplyDeleteWow you have certainly used your imagination here! I loved some of the descriptive language you used especially the lofty pink marsh mellows! I am quite hungry after reading that! One thing you could do to improve your writing (and gain a higher level) is to use punctuation such as capital letters, commas, fullstops and quotation marks when someone speaks.
I hope you enjoy the Distance Learning Arooshi. I look forward to reading more posts from you! Take care. Mrs Pascoe
Hi Aarooshi,
ReplyDeleteGreat writing today, I love the way you have used your 5 senses when you were writing. Just like Mrs Pascoe has said have a think and work on your punctuation when you are writing as it will give your writing more flow.